First and foremost, Aeon is not owned by BlackDevilX, he's owned by me.
Secondly, this is really just bad, dude. You've got some potential as a scripter and animator and you should really focus on building that skill, but you really need to find somebody else do your character designs, story, script, and translations.
Lastly, your code is really bugged up. You may wanna improve the scripting for the spacebar advancement feature, or return to simple timers for the frame advances.
Thanks for your review,
First, I don´t know if you owned Aeon, because I need more evidence.
Secondly, Thanks for rate my movie, I know its kind of bad because I did not explain me in some parts of it. (Specially on Script).
Third and Last, I have improved the code for further movies, Thanks.
I have been late responsing comments, because I don´t check them very often.
Actually, Aeon the Hedgehog belongs to me, not BlackDevilX. He uses my character with my permission.
That aside, this flash seems like a bad hash of everything that's WRONG with sprite/Sonic flash animations. Unoriginal character design for the "uberboss", generic storyline, horrible DBZ EVERYTHING... You can do much better. Keep practicing, and look for some new resources, because SMBZ and FFSX beat DBZ shit into the dirt. e_e
It's pretty good, and I like how effectively you emulate an anime style with it, but I have some suggestions.
The opening and ending sequences... Each of those should probably be it's own separate video. I had also noticed that you used songs that just felt inappropriate for the scene you were portraying.
Voices would also be a great addition, as SS4FlameAlchemist has said.
Hit me up in messages sometime, and I'll help you with that voicing issue. :D
This looks traced, dude...
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